Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Concrete poem

                                                                  Away                                                                       
                                                               Not Home                                                                   
                                                       Feeling        Tired                                                               
                                                    Trying                 Hard                                                           
                                                 Little                         Brother                                                    
                                          Attempting To Overcome The Other                                              
                                 Reaching For                                Something Unknown                           
                        Hoping For                                                 Something Not Shown                  
        Looking Forward                                                            Disappointed By Today            
                                                                                                                                                   
                                                                Social                                                                          
                                                         Working Hard                                                                   
                                                  Living In The Moment                                                             
                                            Doing What He Wants In Life                                                       
                                            Already There, Not Searching                                                      
                                               Always There For Others                                                           
                                                              Caring                                                                           
                                                          Big Brother                                                                                                                                                                    

1 comment:

  1. Relationship with brother, bottom one, it think yo followed fornat but Im not really sure about the yop one... nice rhyme though.

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